TOPIC: [SSRP Moderator] {IM] FrainBreezed's application.

RP Name [Cobra] FrainBreezed
Link to Steam Profile steamcommunity.com/id/AaroneSegure
SteamID STEAM_0:1:24096320
Current Gametracker Profiles
Server 1 - www.gametracker.com/player/{IM} FrainBreezed/play.zarpgaming.com:27015/
Server 2 - www.gametracker.com/player/{IM} FrainBreezed/play.zarpgaming.com:27025/

Age 10

Estimated Server Time I don't know.

Languages I speak Spanish & English.

Explain "Random Death Match" and give an example scenario.

Random Death Match is when someone kills a person randomly, without explanation.
An example scenario would be:
x is walking on the street to the PD to do something but in the middle of the way y runs to him and shoots him
randomly with a shotgun.

Explain "New Life Rule" and give an example scenario.
When they kill you, you don't remember anything and can't go back to that place in 5 minutes and you can't revenge the player. (New Life)

x kills y
y cannot return to the place because there's NLR

Explain "Metagaming" and give an example scenario.
Saying RP stuff in OOC mode.

Explain how you would handle the following situation:
Player x accuses player y for RDMing him, the console log shows that player y killed player x.

Check in the logs if it was a raid or something, get eyewitnesses, etc.

Explain how you would handle the following situation:
Player x accuses player y for breaking NLR, the kills are pretty close together in console (a few lines apart) at a peak time.
Check who killed who first and if the other person changed job to hitman and he had a bounty etc..

Explain how you would handle the following situation:
Player x calls for help in the OOC chat because his bank is being raided
Tell him to F1 and that people can raid everything. Warn him for metagaming and check if he was BUILDING. if it was building warn the raider/s.

Why I should be chosen (we recommend around 150 words).
I've had experience being Moderator in a few places from now, and I think I will be a good moderator here. I think I fit perfectly here, so yeah.

(I know I didn't say 150 words but...)

- Never seen ingame
- Application looks rushed ( You put etc, also you only put 29 words. Not 150.
No metagaming scenario - also you dont straight up warn them
- Your GameTracker links are not completed
- Dont know about recent warns

If their are any changes i will update my post, but for now im going to -support

-sent from my phone-

Application is rushed.

Gametracker links are not working.
-Gametime is alright but activity is horrendous.

Explain "New Life Rule" and give an example scenario.-3 minutes*

Give a scenario for the following:
Explain "Metagaming" and give an example scenario.

Expand the following:
Player x accuses player y for RDMing him, the console log shows that player y killed player x.
Player x accuses player y for breaking NLR, the kills are pretty close together in console (a few lines apart) at a peak time.
Player x calls for help in the OOC chat because his bank is being raided

What does this got to do with building and raiding when we're talking about a metagaming scenario?

Why I should be chosen (we recommend around 150 words).
You can type way more than that. A recommendation for that amount of words increase your chances though it's not crucial.

I don't know how many warnings you have.

Your application is littered with grammatical and spelling errors , this is a formal document for a formal position. The more professional you make yourself appear the higher chance people will take you seriously and possibly get accepted. I will not repeat anything Walrus has said, just above you, as he said most of the bulk but I wanted to add a few things he did not say.

I suggest neating up your application as you have random new lines and when you talk about player x and y please use a constant term for them, like x or y or player x and y but do not jump between the two terms as it gets confusing for the reader.

I have made the main "to-work-on" points bold.

Good Luck,

First and foremost, we'd like to thank you for making the effort to apply for a rank on the ZARP Semi Serious DarkRP. Your application has been discussed at an administrative meeting, and from there it has been voted on.


Unfortunately as more staff members voted 'no' than 'yes', the application has been denied.

The meeting host has taken some criticisms made by the admins and provided you with this feedback:

You are welcome to apply again at any point.