TOPIC: [DARKRP] Brazil-Jack's Moderator Application

RP Name: Brazil-Jack
Link to Steam Profile: steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561197962706911
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:1220591

Age 14

Estimated Server Time: Approximately around 500hours.

Languages I speak: Swedish & English


Explain "Random Death Match" and give an example scenario:
RDM is when you kill another player on the server without a Roleplaying reason. A good example of RDM can be if you are just running around whacking every cracker you find around the sidewalks without you having any reason for doing so.

Explain "New Life Rule" and give an example scenario:
The new life rule in short means that if you get killed your character from before is dead and you'r now a whole new character. That means that if you for example get bullied and the killed by some other player you can't go back and kill this player after you have re spawned because you'r a new character that don't have any reason to do so.

Explain "Metagaming" and give an example scenario.:
Meta gaming means that you when playing by using types of communication that ar outside of roleplaying and then use this information when playing as character. An example of this can be that you trough the OOC channel get information about a drug lab and then go straight there and steal the stuff. Meta gaming is also mabye the hardest rule to uphold when it's often hard to specify where a character have got hold of the information or if he/she just happend to find for example a drug lab.


Why I should be chosen (longer answer expected here - at least 150 words).

The reason why I think that I deserve to earn the rank of moderator?(When reading this, think of it as it's read with the beautiful voice and ways of Morgan Freeman) - Well it all started more than 1 year ago. It was an beautiful eavning, I think it was spring outside. It was an ordinary day on the DarkRP server and none of the server occupants didn't think twice about this young boy who had just entered the server for the first time. Sure I had played allot of servers before, traveling from one server to another. But when I came to this place, I some how knew that my many travels had come to an end. At least for now. I walked the streets up and down gasping in excitement over everything I saw. There you could see Bums building the most beautiful things on the streets, ordinary citizens just walking about, strong police officers full of pride, gangsters and thieves in the back alleys and drug dealers with more cash than I had ever dreamed of working the streets.

I got my self a tiny old apartment, here I set up my first money printer and later on also my first meth lab. This truly was a server of possibilities for a young man like my self. With money on my pocket like never before I got to experience a whole new life that I never thought a traveller like my self could ever have.

I love this server. from that first spring evening I have loved it. We have lived together through both the good times and bad. This server gave me as a young traveler the chance of a new life, and so I wish to give everything I can back to this server. I want to help it grow, I everybody to have the possibility to find a new life here. I wish to uphold the rules, the soul and the spirit of this server. This server gave life to me so I will give my life to it.

You wold never regret awarding me with the honorable status of Moderator.

Best Regards
Brazil-Jack

I really do not think so.

You have only played for .. 27 hours or so?


Cracker? I hope you mean person.
You could have given a better explanation.

Such as

New Life Rule means that if you get killed, you have to wait 3 minutes before you go back to the place you died.
You also forget everything that happened in your past life.

Yes, you can say you are a new character, but some people might not know the things I just said.
Metagaming is pretty easy.

(OOC) Smallville : I got some druglabs in my base, it is so nice. Anyone wanna come over?
[HWarn] Smallville has been warned by Smallville for reason : Metagame [1 warns total]

How you warn him?

/warn smallville Metagame
In other words : I like the server.

I will make it so you can see what is not needed in what I just quoted.
It has a thing through the words that are not needed.

I will show what is not needed again.

Showing that you have not even attempted to go back over your application to look over gramatical errors does not reflect well on your application. I also Highly doubt you have played 500 hours considering I have never seen you on ZARP once.
In here, you don\'t really give a scenario, just a definition.


From reading this, I see that you love ZARP, but mostly for RP reasons. We\'d like to see moderators helping out the community in any way that can possible and helping players, not Role-playing with friends for a casual gaming session.
You sound like you think this is some sort of joke? Even though this may not be intended, it does seem so. I suggest going over your application again, and touch up on it a bit. Multiple Grammatical errors, run-ons, and miss communication is used here, and I suggest it be revised.

What we liked

Where you need to improve
- Do not know who you are
- Improper language in application
- Playtime
VERDICT: DENIED