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I was told by my teacher... 9 years 3 months ago #203601

That i had a talent in writing poetry i laughed so hard when he said that. He got pissed off. I only ever wrote 1 poem and it was for english coursework or some shit like that

I'll post it here but the challenge isn't in that.

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The challenge is in analysing it.

Whoever gives me the closest the description/analysis to what I am referring to: I will give you a cookie and 10 euros on steam.

Cheerios.
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I was told by my teacher... 9 years 3 months ago #203648

I thought it has potential, maybe when you transition stanzas you could try to not change the point you're trying to convey so drastically. Other than that not bad.
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I was told by my teacher... 9 years 3 months ago #203695

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