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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83102

For all those who are interested, I am writing a fantasy novel. I will give you a little taster of the first chapter.
I thought you might want to see it. I am open to feedback and what should happen next. Its quite a long read so you may want to take your time if you are into it. :side:

This novel was part of National Novel Writing Month. I took part and this was my entry. My goal was 3000 words. I have succeeded today (29/11) with 3028 words and therefore I have passed and won! I will continue to work on it. but here is was my 2014 winner badge


As I have passed my goal, I get two free paper back copys of the book! I am really happy and will continue to work on it for you guys.

Prologue / Chapter One:
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Chapter 2
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Chapter 3 (Currently Working on)

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Here is the Updated PDF Version if you want to read it offline. (Updated on the 29/11)

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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83107

Looks great mate, Keep working on it and maybe one day we will see your book in stores.
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RedPowder wrote:
Looks great mate, Keep working on it and maybe one day we will see your book in stores.

True dat :3
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Didn't read it all, but dam you can type! i would've died after typing 2 paragraphs lol. Keep up the good work the novel is coming out good.
EDIT: 4 Scorpion... Y DA DOUBLE POST!?!?
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Didn't read it all, but dam you can type! i would've died after typing 2 paragraphs lol. Keep up the good work the novel is coming out good.
EDIT: 4 Scorpion... Y DA DOUBLE POST!?!?

I'm on my phone at school, and it was a glitch :P
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83125

Thanks for all your support, I am currently working on Chpt 2 if you want to see it
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83177

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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83179

wallcop100 wrote:
Bump

Please don't bump after only 4 hours since the last post.
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wallcop100 wrote:
Bump

Please don't bump after only 4 hours since the last post.

Sorry ;_ ;
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83185

Wallcop I didn't think you have it in you. I invite you to my book club now plox.
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83213

Too much to read.
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Too much to read.
Told you so! :cheer:
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83566

Updated Chapter 2. :cheer:

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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83567

Wow you impressed me. Very beautifully done I say!
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83606

hopking1 wrote:
Too much to read.

Yeah.. I'm lazy so i'm guessing it's good. :D
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83701

More... I demand more!
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83713

I enjoy reading from time to time but this isnt for me nor is it my type of story

couple things though:
-flesh out your characters better through their actions and dialogue, the main charachter isnt saying much at all nor or conversations really being had
-not much detail is being put into the story, forcing the reader to imagine everything maybe not as intended
- things are happening too quickly if your trying to just write flat action ok but eh ok
-goblins are attacking but orcs killed his mum

i dont feel like writing anymore nor want to criticize you on grammer

pracitice is good though youll get better with practice
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83727

Looks great WallCop!
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I am writing a novel 10 years 1 month ago #83751

Update
-Added Chapter 3
-Updated PDF
-Added National Novel Writing Month Info and Picture
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