TOPIC: A little poem I wrote.

This poem highlights the importance and significance of Afro-American rap music and the impact on white rappers in this community. Please give me feedback it took me a little while.

In the world of gaming, there is a site,
Where gamers of all backgrounds unite,
But on this site, there is a change,
A change that is truly quite strange.

Caucasian gamers, once so still,
Have begun to rap with an African-American skill,
Thanks to the influence of a musical art,
That came from a culture set far apart.

This culture, with roots deep in the past,
From African-American history does it cast,
Its influence on the modern age,
With music that sets hearts ablaze.

Rap music, with its catchy beat,
Has swept the world off its feet,
And in the world of gaming too,
It has found its way, bright and true.

In Zarpgaming, a community strong,
Caucasian gamers who had never rapped long,
Began to feel the pull of the music,
And found a new way to express and use it.

The lyrics and beats that rap employs,
Have found their way into the Caucasian boys,
And girls too, who now feel the flow,
And can rap with a style that's really quite dope.

The effect of African-American rap,
On the Caucasian gamers of Zarpgaming, is not just a snap,
But a change in culture that's truly quite deep,
A cultural exchange that's truly unique.

For the barriers of race that once divided,
Are being broken down, and no longer are they decided,
By the color of one's skin, but the rhythm of one's soul,
And the love of music, that makes us all whole.

So as the gamers of Zarpgaming unite,
In the love of rap, and the joy it brings to the night,
Remember the power of music, to bring us together,
And to help us see, that our differences can't last forever.

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The sun was setting o'er the Jay house fair
A jenkem instead of applesauce there
The hour was the fourth past noon
The day the last of the week's boon

The family in joyous merriment played
With jenkem their appetites they slayed
A jovial meal was had by all
As their laughter echoed into the hall

A jenkem instead of applesauce that day
A novel delight that most did say
For that moment in time they did savor
The jenkem and its unique flavor

[Chorus: PinkPantheress]
The-the boy's a liar, the boy's a liar
He doesn't see ya, you're not looking at me, boy
The boy's a liar, the boy's a liar
He doesn't see ya, you're not looking at me, boy

[Post-Chorus: PinkPantheress]
Good eno-o-ough, good eno-o-ough
Good eno-o-ough, good eno-o-ough
Good eno-o-ough, good eno-o-ough
Good eno-o-ough, good eno-o-ough

[Verse 3: Ice Spice]
He say that I'm good enough, grabbin' my duh-duh-duh
Thinkin' 'bout shit that I shouldn't have (Huh)
So I tell him there's one of me, he makin' fun of me (Ha-ha)
His girl is a bum to me (Grrah)
Like that boy is a cap
Sayin' he home, but I know where he at, like
Bet he blowin' her back
Thinkin' 'bout me 'cause he know that ass fat (Damn)
And it been what it been (Huh)
Callin' his phone like, "Yo, send me a pin"
Duckin' my shit, 'cause he know what I'm on (Grrah)
But when he hit me I'm not gon' respond (Grrah)
But I don't sleep enough without you
And I can't eat enough without you (Huh)
If you don't speak, does that mean we're through? (Huh)
Don't like sneaky shit that you do (Grrah)

Whoa
Eyes up, you've been gone for a fortnite
My love, are you stuck in a fake life?
Can't win, if the prize is to waste your time
Now it's wasting mine
And I know that we're close but I'm lonely
Make me your only, won't win a trophy
But can it kiss you like this when you hold me?
Missing it low-key, I'll say it slowly
It's me or the PS5
Tell me how you wanna spend your night
Three's feeling way too tight
So if it's not me, then I'm probably gonna run it over
Me or the PS5
Tell me which of us is more your type
Seems like you can't decide
So if it's not me, then I'm probably gonna run it over
My love, know I'm in for the long ride (in for the long ride)
I'm not playing games of the wrong kind (of the wrong kind)
Could be keeping secrets and telling lies
But I'm just online, and I can promise you
I'll never play ya, I'll find a way to
Show you I'm grateful, so I'm begging you
Two minutes only, you'll get a trophy
I'm staying faithful
It's me and the PS5
Tell me why you making me decide (yeah)
Please, don't you see I'm live? (I'm live)
So if you don't leave, I can find a way to win you over
Me and the PS5
Least you know where I'ma be at night (yeah)
Score's never been this high (so high)
So if you don't leave, I can find a way to win you over
Me or the PS5
Me or the PS5
Me or the PS5

Gather 'round, children young and old,
To hear stories of the poo untold,
A tale of a great power,
Ones that could blanket the shower.

It's something so gross, that's universally known,
With repulsiveness like a rubbing stone,
No matter what race you come from,
We all know the stench of poo does come.

It lurks in the dark, its smell like bees,
The pungent odor will bring you to your knees,
It's something that's common, shared across this land,
This thing that's so universal, to which we don't understand.

It's seen in the bushes and heard through the trees,
This monster that be sentient, now with our knowledge teased,
It's all part of nature, no matter how often it's cursed,
Poo's color, texture and smell, it outlasts the worst.

No matter how far around the world you go,
It doesn't matter if you're white, brown or a crow,
The smell of poo it is so repugnant and quaint,
No matter which nation, this vile smell always taints.

Oh tell me, friends, what is your favorite car brand,
Is it the speed of Ferrari, or the luxury of a Rolls-Royce grand?
Is it the reliability of Toyota, or the power of a Mustang wild?
Or perhaps the elegance of a Mercedes-Benz, like a true royal's style?

Is it the classic style of a vintage Mustang or Corvette,
Or the futuristic flair of a Tesla, with all the latest tech?
Is it the rugged toughness of a Jeep, ready for any terrain,
Or the sleek design of a Porsche, a true driver's domain?

Each car brand has its unique charm, its own personality,
A reflection of the driver's style, with all its originality,
So tell me, friends, what is your favorite car brand, and why,
And let's celebrate our love for cars, with a joyful high!

Whoo!
Mmm, yeah
Life's like a road that you travel on
When there's one day here, and the next day gone
Sometimes you bend, sometimes you stand
Sometimes you turn your back to the wind
There's a world outside every darkened door
Where blues won't haunt you anymore
Where the brave are free and lovers soar
Come ride with me to the distant shore
We won't hesitate
To break down the garden gate
There's not much time left today, yeah
Life is a highway
I wanna ride it all night long
If you're goin' my way
Well, I wanna drive it all night long
Through all these cities and all these towns
It's in my blood, and it's all around
I love you now like I loved you then
This is the road, and these are the hands
From Mozambique to those Memphis nights
The Khyber Pass to Vancouver's lights
Knock me down and back up again
You're in my blood, I'm not a lonely man
There's no load I can't hold
A road so rough, this I know
I'll be there when the light comes in
Just tell 'em we're survivors
Life is a highway
I wanna ride it all night long (whoo!)
If you're goin' my way
I wanna drive it all night long (all night long)
A-gimme, gimme, gimme, gimme, yeah
Life is a highway
Well, I wanna ride it all night long, mmm, yeah
If you're goin' my way (if you're goin' my way)
I wanna drive it all night long (all night long)
There was a distance between you and I (between you and I)
A misunderstanding once
But now we look it in the eye, ooh, yeah
Mmm, yeah (whoo!)
There ain't no load that I can't hold
A road so rough, this I know
I'll be there when the light comes in
Tell 'em we're survivors
Life is a highway
Well, I wanna ride it all night long (all night long, yeah)
If you're goin' my way
Well, I wanna drive it all night long
A-gimme, gimme, gimme
A-gimme, gimme, yeah
Life is a highway (life is a highway)
I wanna ride it all night long, whoo, ooh, yeah
If you're goin' my way (if you're goin' my way)
I wanna drive it all night long (all night long, yeah)
C'mon, gimme, gimme, gimme
Gimme, gimme, gimme, yeah
Life is a highway
I wanna ride it all night long
(Yeah, I wanna drive it all night long, baby)
If you're goin' my way (if you're goin' my way)
I wanna drive it all night long (all night long)

yisyas wrote:
didn't answer my question