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TOPIC: Poetic / Rap Piece

Poetic / Rap Piece 4 years 1 month ago #1277472

What's the point. Please delete.	Siren Offline Legendary Member An Old Man Posts: 895 Thanks received: 1134 Karma: 108
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Poetic / Rap Piece 4 years 1 month ago #1277474

That font is utter garbage. Gave up reading the rest not even halfway through. Since you added the spoiler with the text, I read it to the end. Is it about a tattoo artist? If so, I like some of the lines. If not, then It seems like I can't understand it.	RandomdudeDK Offline Legendary Member It's always 420 somewhere Posts: 1782 Thanks received: 675 Karma: 31
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Poetic / Rap Piece 4 years 1 month ago #1277583

Would be cool to see some proper opinions on this	Siren Offline Legendary Member An Old Man Posts: 895 Thanks received: 1134 Karma: 108
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Poetic / Rap Piece 4 years 1 month ago #1277599

Siren wrote: Would be cool to see some proper opinions on this Are you implying random’s comment isn’t a “proper opinion”	Shark Offline Gold Boarder Cryptocommunist Posts: 2073 Thanks received: 697 Karma: 6
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Poetic / Rap Piece 4 years 1 month ago #1277749

Some ways you could improve for your next piece: 1) Try to write it in a way where it makes sense 2) Refer to 1)	Denis Offline Diamond Boarder Posts: 2812 Thanks received: 1365 Karma: -49
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Poetic / Rap Piece 4 years 1 month ago #1277763

I don't think you'll ever be ready to rap, or even produce lyrics if you're already giving up after 2-3 people voicing their opinions.	RandomdudeDK Offline Legendary Member It's always 420 somewhere Posts: 1782 Thanks received: 675 Karma: 31
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Poetic / Rap Piece 4 years 1 month ago #1277770

I'm not trying to rap or produce lyrics. Was just something I thought sounded kinda cool. Just slightly degrading when it's the 1st time sharing a piece as I said in my original post. I'm an adult, I'm not going to cry about it. But I wasn't exactly in the best mood. I just thought I'd save myself and others the trouble by getting rid of it.	Siren Offline Legendary Member An Old Man Posts: 895 Thanks received: 1134 Karma: 108
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Poetic / Rap Piece 4 years 1 month ago #1277771

Siren wrote:

I'm not trying to rap or produce lyrics. Was just something I thought sounded kinda cool. Just slightly degrading when it's the 1st time sharing a piece as I said in my original post. I'm an adult, I'm not going to cry about it. But I wasn't exactly in the best mood.

I just thought I'd save myself and others the trouble by getting rid of it.

Don't worry about it lad ppl are not very nice on the internet thats all!