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Poetic / Rap Piece 3 years 5 months ago #1277472

What's the point.

Please delete.
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Poetic / Rap Piece 3 years 5 months ago #1277474

That font is utter garbage.
Gave up reading the rest not even halfway through.

Since you added the spoiler with the text, I read it to the end.
Is it about a tattoo artist? If so, I like some of the lines.
If not, then It seems like I can't understand it.
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Poetic / Rap Piece 3 years 5 months ago #1277583

Would be cool to see some proper opinions on this :unsure:
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Poetic / Rap Piece 3 years 5 months ago #1277599

Siren wrote:
Would be cool to see some proper opinions on this :unsure:
Are you implying random’s comment isn’t a “proper opinion”
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Poetic / Rap Piece 3 years 5 months ago #1277749



Some ways you could improve for your next piece:

1) Try to write it in a way where it makes sense

2) Refer to 1)
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Poetic / Rap Piece 3 years 5 months ago #1277763

I don't think you'll ever be ready to rap, or even produce lyrics if you're already giving up after 2-3 people voicing their opinions.

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Poetic / Rap Piece 3 years 5 months ago #1277770

I'm not trying to rap or produce lyrics. Was just something I thought sounded kinda cool. Just slightly degrading when it's the 1st time sharing a piece as I said in my original post. I'm an adult, I'm not going to cry about it. But I wasn't exactly in the best mood.

I just thought I'd save myself and others the trouble by getting rid of it.
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Poetic / Rap Piece 3 years 5 months ago #1277771

Siren wrote:
I'm not trying to rap or produce lyrics. Was just something I thought sounded kinda cool. Just slightly degrading when it's the 1st time sharing a piece as I said in my original post. I'm an adult, I'm not going to cry about it. But I wasn't exactly in the best mood.

I just thought I'd save myself and others the trouble by getting rid of it.
Don't worry about it lad ppl are not very nice on the internet thats all!
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