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Fix this, pls 5 years 8 months ago #1097624

This thread has lousy grammar lol. I rewrote it, so it's somewhat better formulated. Change it please, my OCD is going sicko mode I think it's about to shoot up a school. :^(

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Please be sure to consider the follow when you resign due to a lot of people not making their minds up and causing mass confusion within the ranks and community-wide. You will only get ONE chance a month to retract your resignation
NOTE: You only have a week to make your mind up about if your staying or not after a week you need to reapply! Please be sure to leave a message on your thread if you retracted your resignation so the community knows also.

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Please be sure to consider the following when you resign; due to a lot of people not making their minds up and causing mass confusion within the ranks and throughout the community, you will only get ONE chance to retract your resignation per month.

NOTE: You only have a week to make your mind up about if you're staying or not. One week after your resignation you are no longer eligible to revoke your resignation! Please update your thread if you decide to resign, so the community is aware.

XOXOXO,
self-proclaimed grammar nazi, Rick Johnson

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Last Edit: 5 years 8 months ago by Rick Townsend. Reason: Grammar

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Fix this, pls 5 years 8 months ago #1097646

Rick Johnson wrote:

This thread has lousy grammar lol. I rewrote it, so it's somewhat better formulated. Change it please, my OCD is going sicko mode I think it's about to shoot up a school. :^(

Original

Please be sure to consider the follow when you resign due to a lot of people not making their minds up and causing mass confusion within the ranks and community-wide. You will only get ONE chance a month to retract your resignation
NOTE: You only have a week to make your mind up about if your staying or not after a week you need to reapply! Please be sure to leave a message on your thread if you retracted your resignation so the community knows also.

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Please be sure to consider the following when you resign; due to a lot of people not making their minds up and causing mass confusion within the ranks and throughout the community, you will only get ONE chance to retract your resignation per month.

NOTE: You only have a week to make your mind up about if you’re staying or not. One week after your resignation you are no longer eligible to revoke your resignation! Please update your thread if you decide to resign, so the community is aware.

XOXOXO,
self-proclaimed grammar nazi, Rick Johnson

Fellow grammar nazi, I have fixed your horrendous error, please do make sure this will not happen again

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Fix this, pls 5 years 8 months ago #1097652

Kyber wrote:

Rick Johnson wrote:

This thread has lousy grammar lol. I rewrote it, so it's somewhat better formulated. Change it please, my OCD is going sicko mode I think it's about to shoot up a school. :^(

Original

Please be sure to consider the follow when you resign due to a lot of people not making their minds up and causing mass confusion within the ranks and community-wide. You will only get ONE chance a month to retract your resignation
NOTE: You only have a week to make your mind up about if your staying or not after a week you need to reapply! Please be sure to leave a message on your thread if you retracted your resignation so the community knows also.

Corrected

Please be sure to consider the following when you resign; due to a lot of people not making their minds up and causing mass confusion within the ranks and throughout the community, you will only get ONE chance to retract your resignation per month.

NOTE: You only have a week to make your mind up about if you’re staying or not. One week after your resignation you are no longer eligible to revoke your resignation! Please update your thread if you decide to resign, so the community is aware.

XOXOXO,
self-proclaimed grammar nazi, Rick Johnson

Fellow grammar nazi, I have fixed your horrendous error, please do make sure this will not happen again

https://i.gyazo.com/f7e628132dd604d3fb413ede009ad81f.a

Always handy!

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Fix this, pls 5 years 8 months ago #1097673

Kyber wrote:

Rick Johnson wrote:

This thread has lousy grammar lol. I rewrote it, so it's somewhat better formulated. Change it please, my OCD is going sicko mode I think it's about to shoot up a school. :^(

Original

Please be sure to consider the follow when you resign due to a lot of people not making their minds up and causing mass confusion within the ranks and community-wide. You will only get ONE chance a month to retract your resignation
NOTE: You only have a week to make your mind up about if your staying or not after a week you need to reapply! Please be sure to leave a message on your thread if you retracted your resignation so the community knows also.

Corrected

Please be sure to consider the following when you resign; due to a lot of people not making their minds up and causing mass confusion within the ranks and throughout the community, you will only get ONE chance to retract your resignation per month.

NOTE: You only have a week to make your mind up about if you’re staying or not. One week after your resignation you are no longer eligible to revoke your resignation! Please update your thread if you decide to resign, so the community is aware.

XOXOXO,
self-proclaimed grammar nazi, Rick Johnson

Fellow grammar nazi, I have fixed your horrendous error, please do make sure this will not happen again

Homeboy that isn't MY error, I just brushed over it smh.

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Fix this, pls 5 years 8 months ago #1097676

I am already rewriting the entire thing you communist bastard	Nafe Offline Former Community Manager Posts: 18665 Thanks received: 8623 Karma: -378
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