TOPIC: ZARP - Server Trailer

Great work but its more of a map showcase as it doesn't really show the different servers and instead shows the maps they use. I didn't spot any editing errors so dont worry about them

The Gamer Guy wrote: Thanks for the feedback, and when transitioning from Jailbreak to TTT, the bars ends are transparent as I chroma keyed them on a black background instead of a green or blue one.

Where is SSRP?

Where is deathrun? I'm furious!

Pros;

• Good example of all the servers
• Shows people that we have a variety
• Nice amount of work put in to the video.

Cons;

• To much hopping around
• No a clear view of whats going on
• The transitions between servers.

The video was pretty good I just thought the hopping around was a little to much I seemed to only be able to remember that after watching the video because of servers like Prop Hunt, Jail Break and TTT people don't usually just hop around for no reason like that and it makes it hard to focus on anything else in the video. The beginning cut be cut in half but kept the same First person view and then when you get to Bhop you should of had an over view of someone else doing it and then the servers where you don't need to move around so much just walk and speed them clips up a little maybe x3 and that would be perfect. The transitions between servers wasn't as smooth as I hoped but they wasn't bad and had the right idea behind them for an example the garage door going in to the Bhop server was a nice idea I just think that it could of been maybe more of a faded effect and not such a SKIP if you get what I mean.

You could also try getting a little set up of players doing it so the ''servers'' don't look dead and people could see how its done. I don't mean make a whole clip with someone doing the entire map but a couple seconds long video of someone shooting, hopping on a block and so on. Try fitting as much content in to the shortest amount of space possible because remember its a trailer not a movie nobody wants to sit there watching a long ass trailer. You want people to be hooked from a min or so of video and thats it.

I think you could´ve shown a bit more players in TTT and PH, done like that, it looks like a a map showcase or a bhop montage. Other tan that, it looks really nice! However you forgot deathrun..
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Nick0GR wrote: Haven't ever played it sadly, same with Deathrun, so I had no idea what maps or what to showcase, yet again it's mainly just a small project for criticism, haven't edited in a while and just wanted to get back into AE and Vegas

You should definitely hop on Deathrun to hop some more :3

WOW not even deathrun -___- add it

deathrun

Seems like you’re not the Deathrun kinda guy eh, well anyway I think your graphics work is amazing and hopefully your stuff can be used in this community

Go play deathrun server 2 that used to have 40 players yes that server was good it even had ghost mode best server

I'm surprised there are more people complaining about the lack of Deathrun in the video than the lack of SSRP lol

Anyways, good work. Just wish this was an actual server trailer, rather than a map showcase. There's a very big difference between what you show and what the servers are actually like, except for Surf and Bhop where you actually do that stuff.

Really nicely made though!

Raeker wrote: wait ssrp was in that?

Smol Donge wrote: Hopefully working on another project without time restrictions and I will take in all of your feedback, all 7 servers will be included and will show features of each gamemode.

Smol Donge wrote: Read my sentence again. I'm saying that it isn't.

Raeker wrote: i am smart trust

Nice ! It would be really hard to make a server showcase with gameplays or whatever you want on SSRP as the only thing we're doing is waiting for an update at the moment, join the server once and you'll see that every prices are just incredibly high ^^ When everyone will get suits and stuff you'll be able to make a PVP gameplay with fights and everyhing, it could be great ! ( sorry if i made mistakes i'm french so i only know how to write "baguette" )

GamingTroll wrote: Thanks for the heads up!