Your application could definitely be improved, as currently it's not very detailed. In my eyes, you also need some more experience and you need to improve on your leadership skills, and your ability to communicate with/help other staff members.

Best of luck.

Your application could definitely be improved, as currently it's not very detailed. In my eyes, you also need some more experience and you need to improve on your leadership skills, and your ability to communicate with/help other staff members. Best of luck.