Thanks for applying!
Your application isn't very good and lacks a lot of detail which makes the application seem rushed. You are also very immature which I believe is something that you need to work on before applying for staff.
Good Luck!

Thanks for applying! Your application isn't very good and lacks a lot of detail which makes the application seem rushed. You are also very immature which I believe is something that you need to work on before applying for staff. Good Luck!