I'm just getting the vibe of it being rushed, 104 words in your "Why I should be chosen", I just feel like you should go more into detail if you really do want staff and think you would be a great staff member, I feel also like colour coding would be good so it's easier on the eye to read and or making the question's bold or underlined, just the small things can really show how much you're dedicated to getting staff, I'm sorry but it has to be a