Dunno about ingame, But I've helped you with your app and you didn't apply a single piece of what I told you, the app is very bland and it doesn't really highlight why you should be chosen, I suggest reading what I put before and changing your application.

Dunno about ingame, But I've helped you with your app and you didn't apply a single piece of what I told you, the app is very bland and it doesn't really highlight why you should be chosen, I suggest reading what I put before and changing your application.