I recommend using a technique called paragraphing, seeing as you're fluent in English, this won't be a problem.
A text of wall with an annoying colour to read is annoying.

You also seem to be repeating yourself when I skim-read it, you should narrow it down a notch and put out the key factors rather than stretching it into a mess.

I recommend using a technique called paragraphing, seeing as you're fluent in English, this won't be a problem. A text of wall with an annoying colour to read is annoying. You also seem to be repeating yourself when I skim-read it, you should narrow it down a notch and put out the key factors rather than stretching it into a mess.