My scottish ned, you should lay off the Bucky and play 2 weeks bud.
Your application, contrary to what others have said, has enough detail to be deemed worthy of being accepted. You provide just enough detail on the explanations of each scenario, and give examples very well. However, as many people above have said, your activity on both servers isn't well kept, with a non-constant, small activity held throughout the past two weeks. I would recommend you try and pick up your hours in the next week, and you should be fine.

Needs to improve on activity throughout the week