PROS:
Amazing overall time
Has become involved in the community
NEUTRALS:
Extremely bad reputation with the community (or at least within gangs)
This is neutral because staff doesn't consider this very bad, just a tad disapproving
CONS:
NLR scenario is incorrect
Player Y would be given off with no action, but a final statement. Player X could've moved locations and killed player Y (or vise versa) for an entirely different RP reason
Metagaming explanation is scenario specific, and does not specify where chat "Player 2" chatted
Metagaming scenario is very wrong
Player X wouldn't be warned right away, as he/she didn't do it before. They also wouldn't be warned right away if they were in a raid, they would be told in OOC chat to stop metagaming, and take the chat message elsewhere. If they fail to do that, you take them to a roof and explain to them. If they still fail, you finally warn them
Gametrackers are broken/you barely have any time this week
Staff requires ~two weeks of good, constant activity when the time for the meeting comes, most of the time
Overall:
-Needs better explanations and situation handling
-Needs
MUCH better recent time
-You've been in the community for a while, and have gotten to know people
Other Notes:
-Teamspeak is a required resource for staff, so that they can attend meetings and deal with users via a private conversation. You put this in your "why I should be staff" section, but it should be had by all staff at this point, which is why many applications don't include it