Hello Cozey I have read through your application and I have found some improvements that could be made to improve your application.
Explain "New Life Rule" and give an exmple scenario.
Also called NLR. It's where a player goes back to the place where he/she had died and either killed a person or just went back To The Same district Its 4 Minutes till your can go back. Let's say player one kills player two for a legit reason, he goes back And either kills him and or goes back to where player one has to kill him he would have committed NLR.
Comments: Umm i don't think you quite know how long the nlr timer is because the nlr timer is 3 minutes not 4 also you could mention that you forget about your past life .
Explain "Metagaming" and give an example scenario.
Also called Meta. It's when a player says something from In game in /ooc. Player one says: "Hey player two, they are raiding us. Go now to kill them or we will lose our printers" or, "hey meet us at the bank" that would be Meta.
As in the rules Meta gaming could also be Vice Versa or the other way round.
Remember my final opinion will be in the meeting