Hello. I've been reading through your application and couldn't help but notice you hadn't included examples for the rule explanations. If you could add this to your application that would be great!
Otherwise, since I know you are 11 then grammer and paragraph structure might not be your strong suit but your application would look a bit better if you looked them over again, since right now for me at least it's a bit weird for my eyes to read through but don't think too much about it.

Also your last scenario could be a little bit more detailed!

For me it's a until these small flaws have been corrected. after you've corrected your errors

Also no recent warnings which is nice to see.

Hello. I've been reading through your application and couldn't help but notice you hadn't included examples for the rule explanations. If you could add this to your application that would be great! Otherwise, since I know you are 11 then grammer and paragraph structure might not be your strong suit but your application would look a bit better if you looked them over again, since right now for me at least it's a bit weird for my eyes to read through but don't think too much about it. Also your last scenario could be a little bit more detailed! For me it's a :plussp: [strike]until these small flaws have been corrected.[/strike] after you've corrected your errors Also no recent warnings which is nice to see.