Very good application, it has some good explanations. I do think that you need to add a little more to "Why i should be chosen", at least 75 words. I've spoken to you a couple of times, both in-game and on teamspeak, and you seem to be a really nice guy

One thing that you should improve, is your activity. The minimum hours for staff members is 4 hours a week, and you only have 2 hours of activity this week.