I feel you should expand more on your application, it feels a bit short and looks a bit rushed to me. I don't know how much time you put into it but I feel like it needs more.
Further more I do agree with Blocked if what he said is correct.
A little side note. Why do people comment just to say that they'll leave their opinion in the meeting? Be a bit constructive tell them what you feel they should improve and what they're doing good. If you don't have an opinion no need to post.
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