Here is your gametracker for server one :
www.gametracker.com/player/N3verwind/play.zarpgaming.com:27015/
I am not a moderator or a administrator but here is some advise on what I think you can do to improve your application.
The application itself seems a bit rushed and your gametime on server 1 is only 41 hours so that should be improved but from the gametracker they can clearly see you are active. Some of the answers are a little rushed and the layout of the application should be improved.
To improve you should go through and add BBcodes to your application which will make it look more professional and it will be easier to read. You can find the tutorial for BBcodes
here or just use the text editor to improve the layout of you application.
You should go through and try and add in more detail when you can and I would also erge you to look at other peoples applications and this will help you improve your answers and layout of the application. Stay active as much as you can on server one to improve your gametime.
Good luck!