Your application is littered with grammatical and spelling errors , this is a formal document for a formal position. The more professional you make yourself appear the higher chance people will take you seriously and possibly get accepted. I will not repeat anything Walrus has said, just above you, as he said most of the bulk but I wanted to add a few things he did not say.

I suggest neating up your application as you have random new lines and when you talk about player x and y please use a constant term for them, like x or y or player x and y but do not jump between the two terms as it gets confusing for the reader.

I have made the main "to-work-on" points bold.

Good Luck,

Your application is littered with [b]grammatical and spelling errors[/b] , this is a [b]formal document[/b] for a formal position. The more professional you make yourself appear the higher chance people will take you seriously and possibly get accepted. I will not repeat anything Walrus has said, just above you, as he said most of the bulk but I wanted to add a few things he did not say. I suggest [b]neating up your application [/b]as you have[b] random new lines[/b] and when you talk about player x and y please [b]use a constant term [/b]for them, like x or y or player x and y but[b] do not jump between the two terms [/b]as it gets confusing for the reader. I have made the main "to-work-on" points bold. Good Luck,