I agree with others saying more effort could be included, perhaps you could be more precise and sure of what you're saying, reading your application it seems like you're playing a guessing game ( not to be offensive, but you don't really specify things enough, try and go for estimates, not using phrases like "everyday for a long time". )

I agree with others saying more effort could be included, perhaps you could be more precise and sure of what you're saying, reading your application it seems like you're playing a guessing game ( not to be offensive, but you don't really specify things enough, try and go for estimates, not using phrases like "everyday for a long time". )