Right now that you have fixed your application i'm going to respond to it.
Good points
Nice application corrected the GT links
The examples you have given are good answers for the "Give three examples of an acceptable KOS and its scenario" and "Give two examples of unacceptable KOS and their scenarios".
Bad points
Activity could be better
the "Why I should be chosen" you have only written 64 words so far and it clearly says on the application template "at least 75 words" so can you please fix this.
Recently been banned from TTT for 1 week by Tom.
My final conclusion now i'm going -Support because of you recently getting banned for a week.
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