-Activity this week is good (6hours)
-Application is messy and lacks proper structure and coherent sentences.
-I do not agree with your answer for "how to deal with a disrespectful player" , this should be edited and refined.
-"Why i should be chosen" does not pass the 75 word minimum

A -support from me

If you work on these things and/or decide to reapply I'm sure you will stand a much better chance :3

Good luck!

EDIT
- you have listened to advice given to you and tidied up your application. It now looks professional and structured.
- you have edited your "how to deal with a disrespectful player" section and I am now satisfied with your answer.
- you have edited your "why I should be chosen" section and it now surpasses the 75 word minimum.

I am satisfied with how you have changed your application and have decided to change my vote to
+support

Good luck!

-Activity this week is good (6hours) -Application is messy and lacks proper structure and coherent sentences. -I do not agree with your answer for "how to deal with a disrespectful player" , this should be edited and refined. -"Why i should be chosen" does not pass the 75 word minimum A -support from me If you work on these things and/or decide to reapply I'm sure you will stand a much better chance :3 Good luck! EDIT - you have listened to advice given to you and tidied up your application. It now looks professional and structured. - you have edited your "how to deal with a disrespectful player" section and I am now satisfied with your answer. - you have edited your "why I should be chosen" section and it now surpasses the 75 word minimum. I am satisfied with how you have changed your application and have decided to change my vote to +support Good luck!