First of all I think you have great game activity, so i think that is suitable. I also think that the Why should I be chosen is good. The details are nice and you have used the template very effectively so i believe that's alright.

However, the disrespecting part is too short and needs work.

Overall, I am neutral at the moment but if you follow the advice I've told you, I'll defo support you!

Toffee Ethanol
Deathrun Moderator

First of all I think you have great game activity, so i think that is suitable. I also think that the Why should I be chosen is good. The details are nice and you have used the template very effectively so i believe that's alright. However, the disrespecting part is too short and needs work. Overall, I am neutral at the moment but if you follow the advice I've told you, I'll defo support you! Toffee Ethanol Deathrun Moderator