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[spoiler]This is only a substitute IF there is no time to write the long version of my feedback. If you are reading this, then I suggest you head to the longer version. [/spoiler]

Beware the spoiler, for it holds my more detailed feedback to the applicant's app!

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[b][size=4][FONT=Arial Black][color=#ff0000]Caution: This template is edgy and requires focus, please report anything wrong by adding me.[/b][/size]

[FONT=Comic Sans MS]Hello, I'm replying to this Staff Application that you made, because I would like to give my feedback/opinion. This template that I've designed includes everything I need to judge you about organized properly for easy reading. I do not mean/intend to offend you in my feedback and I hope that all my criticism and compliments will be taken into consideration. If you find anything I say to be harsh or useless you can report it to me by adding me on steam.
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[center][FONT=Fixedsys][size=6]Part 1: Application & Gametracker.[/font][/center][/size]
[FONT=Comic Sans MS]In the first part of my feedback, I'll be judging you based on the info/design found in your application as well as, your time and activity on both servers. Note: No matter our current relation, friends or rivals, I will judge you equally.[/font]
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[b]Activity: [color=#00cc00]+ Support [/color]
Time on both servers: [color=#00cc00]+ Support [/color]
Application's Format: [color=#ff0000]- Support [/color]
Application Info: [color=#ff0000]- Support [/color]
Explanation of my verdicts in Part 1: [color=#666666]Alright, I'm going to start off with the design, you haven't use any bbcodes, and I mean at all. If you don't know how to use bbcode, just use the BBcode editor, it basically does the typing for you, all you do is select what color, bold or italic, underlined, etc..
I'll give you a neutral if you bold the question and a + Support if you make it look a lot better.
Now about the information that you have filled the application with, you changed some questions, skipped some and didn't give any scenario. 
I'll help you out with that and quote everything you did wrong along with explaining what's wrong in each.
[quote]Steam Name: the joker411[/quote] 
In the template, it states that we need the RP name and not the Steam Name of the applicant.
Moreover, you skipped the "Estimated Server Time", please add it and answer.

[quote]Explain "Random Death Match" and give an example scenario: random death match is killing a player without a reason for killing him or her and it can happens anywhere at anytime

Explain "New Life Rule" and give an example scenario: new life rule is when someone kills you forgoet everything that happened and there is a timer for the nlr and when your time is still on you cant get back in the place you died in and

Explain "Metagaming" and give an example scenario: metagaming is talking about the situation you are in on steam or on skype or on the /ooc and you cant ask for help from your friends from a long distance[/quote]

No scenarios included, add them.

Now this is not obligatory, but I suggest you write more than 150 words in the last question which is
[quote]Why I should be chosen (longer answer expected here - at least 150 words)[/quote]
Last but not least, fix the spelling and grammar mistakes, if you can although its also not obligatory.

Aside from the above, your time and activity are more than enough to grant you enough experience for moderator.
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[center][FONT=Fixedsys][size=6]Part 2: My opinion.[/font][/center][/size]

[FONT=Comic Sans MS]In this part of my feedback, I'll be determining my notion over my past experience with you. Note: If I don't know you enough I will simply keep my judgement Neutral and will not consider other players/staff's opinion unless the meeting is 6 hours due. In addition to that, I want to note to that, in the F1 Situation section, I will deduce my verdict by considering how you perform during an F1 Situation.[/font]
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F1 Situations: [color=#0000ff]Neutral [/color]
Personality: [color=#0000ff]Neutral [/color]
Matureness: [color=#0000ff]Neutral [/color]
Knowledge of rules: [color=#0000ff]Neutral [/color]
Explanation of my verdicts in Part 2: [color=#666666]The only time I've seen you on the server was yesterday, but you went afk after 10 min of me coming on, so I can't judge you yet.[/color]
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[center][FONT=Fixedsys][size=6]Part 3: Other Opinions.[/font][/center][/size]
[FONT=Comic Sans MS]This section will affect a very small part of my opinion and will be counted as only one when calculating the result of my verdicts. Note: This part will be edited before the meeting.[/font]
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[td]8/29/2014 at 8:35 AM[/td]
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[td][color=#ff0000]- Support[/td]
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Explanation of the result in part 3: [color=#666666] You received more - supports that Neutrals and + supports, thus I suggest you listen to people's criticises. [/color]

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[center][FONT=Fixedsys][size=6]Part 4: Conclusion and Updates.[/font][/center][/size]

[size=3]Summary of my opinion: [color=#666666][FONT=Book Antiqua]Due to having the [color=#0000ff]Neutrals [/color]exceed the amount of [color=#00cc00]+ Supports [/color] and [color=#ff0000]- Supports [/color], I will give you a [color=#0000ff]Neutral [/color]. Note: My opinion is inconsistent until August 30, 2014. Thanks for applying and Good luck![/size]
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[size=5]Final verdict:[color=#0000ff] [FONT=Arial Black]Neutral[/color][/size] [/font]

[size=4][color=#5500ff]Updates: [/color]

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    [td][color=#5500ff]8/29/2014 at 8:35 AM [/td]
    [td][color=#5500ff]Posted Reply[/td]
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