I think you have missed part of this app out, the part about explaining why you should be chosen. Anyway don't think iv saw you on the server so I can't judge you on that but can you please add some color and bold into your application it makes it look so much better and more people are likely to read all the way through it.

I think you have missed part of this app out, the part about explaining why you should be chosen. Anyway don't think iv saw you on the server so I can't judge you on that but can you please add some color and bold into your application it makes it look so much better and more people are likely to read all the way through it.