It's been a while Daniel! I remember actively playing with you. You're a good player who knows the rules more than well, but I suggest rewriting your "Why should I be chosen" part a bit. It's exactly 150 words, which is no problem, but it (for the most part) only describes you knowing people and being a moderator before.

Some of the sentences seem unnecessary, like; "I knew alot of people like: TW!X, Luke, Mason, Smallville, Agent, I cant remember completly but I think it was something like J...,King,Zart, Hunter (or AngryKitty)". This doesn't tell us why you should be chosen. So I suggest completely rewriting that last part.

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It's been a while Daniel! I remember actively playing with you. You're a good player who knows the rules more than well, but I suggest rewriting your "Why should I be chosen" part a bit. It's exactly 150 words, which is no problem, but it (for the most part) only describes you knowing people and being a moderator before. Some of the sentences seem unnecessary, like; [i]"I knew alot of people like: TW!X, Luke, Mason, Smallville, Agent, I cant remember completly but I think it was something like J...,King,Zart, Hunter (or AngryKitty)"[/i]. This doesn't tell us why you should be chosen. So I suggest completely rewriting that last part. [color=#0000bb][b]+/- NEUTRAL[/b][/color]