Glad you've taken my feedback into account. I've read your adjustments.
NLR Question - 10/10
Detailed, accurate.
Handling NLR - 9/10
Good improvements, makes more sense now however rather than simply asking the player if they did break NLR where they are more at liberty to simply deny it, you could work around it by asking their locations on each of the kills, etc. - People do it differently, and each method's effectiveness really applies to the situation and people involved in the conflict. What you have written is substantial, though.