First of you you can't add smileys on your application like Lisol said. It is a serious matter to get the position of a moderator. This shows that you're not ready to get the job.
Secondly insulting or making fun of staff members shows that the place that you are applying for is not appropriate for you. This also has an impact on your application, which makes it even worse.
Another reason which has an negative impact on your application is that you haven't complianced the template. If you want the applications being succesful, then you should orient yourself on the professional world and look after real models. All in all I wish you good luck.
After you edited your application and considered my review, then maybe I will support you.
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