The colors = my eyes hurt.

I would find it better if you invest more time in the 150 words part of the application.
This really looks just written in 5 min.
And you still didn't give an ACTUAL good reason why you should be chosen.

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The colors = my eyes hurt. I would find it better if you invest more time in the 150 words part of the application. This really looks just written in 5 min. And you still didn't give an ACTUAL good reason why you should be chosen. [b][color=#0000ff]NEUTRAL[/color][/b]