Not to sound harsh or anything, but it doesn't look like much effort was put into the application. That, and I've never seen you before today, and only earlier did I give you a warning for prop minging.

The format doesn't seem all that right either, either my eyes are messing up or it's all over the place.

Not even close to 150 words. And this is even when you cut out all the unnecessary quips such as ( minecraft ? wut ) and 'Euhm not sure but il give this a try'

Your grammar is also a bit hard to read, this goes from punctuation to spelling.

I see this, then

Then you have not obviously mastered English.

This is something else that bothers me. Application's aren't supposed to be all fun and games, they're supposed to be serious and informing the reader what you're capable of and what you can provide to the community.

More unnecessary quips, and once again, nowhere near 150 words.

I'm sorry for attacking your application, but someone had to tell you what's gone wrong. And if English isn't your main language, well.. Eh.

Unfortunately, I'm going to have to give this a -SUPPORT

Edit: Smallville beat me to it. Darn.

Not to sound harsh or anything, but it doesn't look like much effort was put into the application. That, and I've never seen you before today, and only earlier did I give you a warning for prop minging. The format doesn't seem all that right either, either my eyes are messing up or it's all over the place. [quote] What is your added value to the community apart from taking care of grievers? (at least 150 words) : Euhm not sure but il give this a try ... fak im so bad ass :O I will try to defend this server against anything that is not allowed and fail rp i will do evreything about it cause i love killing crime :D and grievers ( minecraft ? wut ) will get banned for always ! and im gona be long time on this server to do anything whats needed i also saw the server need a bit help so thats why im apllying for mod and try to kill the grievers .... this is not a realy good text well NEXT QUESTION[/quote] Not even close to 150 words. And this is even when you cut out all the unnecessary quips such as ( minecraft ? wut ) and 'Euhm not sure but il give this a try' Your grammar is also a bit hard to read, this goes from punctuation to spelling. [quote]language mastered : English , Dutch , a shit bit of german and terrible french Rate your english on scale 1/10 Euuhmmm thats a hard one my grammer is like a bit meh but il give it a 7/10 [/quote] I see this, then [quote]Have you had enough community bonding so far? Like what? Euhm dont realy know what to fill in here ... bit akward and google translate wont let me to know what it menas D: sorry i know the basic english atleast :D [/quote] Then you have not obviously mastered English. [quote]Well thats it ! i hope this is a good application .. with some weird stuff in it cause i dont like to be lame :D [/quote] This is something else that bothers me. Application's aren't supposed to be all fun and games, they're supposed to be serious and informing the reader what you're capable of and what you can provide to the community. [quote]What do you expect from your mentor/training (at least 150 words)? Im getting a personal trainer , COOL i dont think i realy need it but i can still try to learn stuff im stol young and will hope to get the server clean and make it 1 happy server and that no one is breaking the rules and i hope to learn alot ... yeah thats it i cant find 150 words for it il give it another try if this is important cause my lil brain cant make alot of word right naow[/quote] More unnecessary quips, and once again, nowhere near 150 words. I'm sorry for attacking your application, but someone had to tell you what's gone wrong. And if English isn't your main language, well.. Eh. Unfortunately, I'm going to have to give this a [b][size=5][color=red]-SUPPORT[/color][/size][/b] Edit: Smallville beat me to it. Darn.