To long and to much effort

I will agree but only partly.
The reason i do agree partly though is because i see no point at all getting in such detail that the application becomes a step by step tutorial instead, whilst also exposes every command and panel the staff team uses to give unneeded specific examples. I understand and respect the good intention and effort, but i have to recognize that normally you'll find modesty and concision show greater professionalism in most occasions, while an application, similar to a CV, needs attention to pain points and strengths with a skill showcase and clear synopsis since long CVs get automatically rejected for a reason.
To summarize, i'd like to point out again that i'd love to see less step by step tutorials in great detail of how you will handle situations, but more of describing briefly and smart instead while letting your actions speak in detail by themselves.