I recommend editing your application instead of making it a separate reply.

NEGATIVES

But other than that I think your application still needs a lot more work, considering that you have only 47 words only on the 'Why I should be chosen', although you have a decent 2 sentences. Your RDM and KOS examples could have been explained in a bit more detail but you've explained them fairly well from what I see. Your activity needs to be more consistent as well since you only have about 3 - 5 days of good activity on the server.

POSITIVES