well as said before your activity isnt the best so I would recommend you to maybe wait till next week and apply then again and improve your activity in the week. However I honestly thing that app is fine, except some parts you could add on to to make it more clear what you are trying to say and your attitude seems quite nice to me aswell. I didnt really noticed you ingame, but we talked a bit over discord and from what I have seen you seem like a pretty nice guy, so please dont get discouraged if you get denied and apply again next week or the week after.

P.S: if you need any help regarding question or the server you know how you can reach out to me