Dr Richard wrote:
I'll give you some feedback on what needs fixing:
> First of all, you just came off a ban, and i think you should wait, in my opinion, 2 weeks minimum.
> Activity. Yes, i am perfectly aware that you were banned and couldn't get any activity, not gonna lie, it is good for a person who has just been unbanned, but you know well yourself that 2 weeks of consistent activity is recommended.
> Application. It is decent but there are some points that should be a bit more.... Detailed. Here i'll give you an example:
Explain "New Life Rule" give an example scenario:
New Life Rule More know as nlr. means if you die in the rich district by any reason you cant go there before the nlr ends. and that is 3min.
The definition of NLR should be like this:
NLR, also know as New Life Rule is a rule in the SSRP community which prevents Users from coming back to the District where they died and prevents them from interacting with anything or anyone from their previous life until the 3-minute timer is done counting down.
Why your definition is wrong? It is correct, partially, you said that they can't go back to the District where they died, and that is correct, but imagine it like this:
Player X kills player Y in the Suburbs District after player Y failed to drop the money during the mug. Player Y decided to pull out a PSG-1 (at Spawn District) and kills player X (who is in the Suburbs District).
This is a situation that your definition does not cover, NLR was obviously broken because the User interacted with something from his previous life before the timer ran out.
> I'm not on SSRP so i can't check your Recent Punishments. Just try not to acquire more than 1 Warn/Offline Warn/Mute, etc and everything should be fine.
Anyways, sorry, but it's gonna be a No from me.

Hol up your NLR example is literally dovah’s but instead just using more words that are unneeded lmao it should be along the lines of :
New Life Rule is a rule that prevents Users from coming back to the District where they died and prevents them from interacting with anything or anyone from their previous life for the next 3 minutes
I thought I’d like to point this out just showing that NLR is a very simple rule and I’m not trying to annoy you but simply showing you a much easier way of expressing the rule.
even that one isn't really correct tho.
You have to act as if you don't remember anything from your past life.
That includes asking him why he did in 10 mins after it happened.
I'd like to mention that the RDM definition is lacking aswell, but I see that in almost every app so that shouldn't be a big deal.