I did spend quite a while on it but when I'm actually writing it I struggle to think of answers. Obviusly I have gone back and checked it for things I have inproved and from Admins and Mods like you people, I have taken your advice and fixed it. I will keep trying to inprove it, and if I dont get in I will keep trying. But thanks for your suggestions guys!

I did spend quite a while on it but when I'm actually writing it I struggle to think of answers. Obviusly I have gone back and checked it for things I have inproved and from Admins and Mods like you people, I have taken your advice and fixed it. I will keep trying to inprove it, and if I dont get in I will keep trying. But thanks for your suggestions guys!