First of all
it should be something like [Punishment Request]”name” or sonething but definetly not ban appeal

Secondly
As sorle clearly and correctly states the photo that ur showing as a proof does not proove anyrhing other than the fact that ur died which is normal to happen so it is clearly not a valid proof that can make a case

third
a firends’ comment is not accepted as a proof so if there is a massive disrespect part u can focus on it idk didnt check all ss
good luck!