Your application is okay though could use more detail and some corrections as Prosyndicate475 has pointed out but you would be trained on how to properly approach these scenarios if accepted in any case. You've just started playing on the server only yesterday and we recommend at least 1-2 weeks of high, consistent activity as to prove your dedication to the server while gaining a good understanding of its rules. I have yet to see you in-game myself so I can't say much else on your attitude.
Overall, while you make a good candidate, your activity is lacking so I would like to see you apply next week as well while keeping up the activity. Good luck!