I am glad to see you going for Moderator first, after the last time you were here you did abuse. But it was due to a hacked account I think?
Anyway you are yet to play on the server so I would recommend getting online and playing again.
Your application is alright but could be improve, maybe look at other apps for inspiration?
Anyway get the activity up and maybe add a bit more to the "Why I should be chosen" and you will stand a good chance.
Best of luck!