Your application is decent though I wonder about scenario 3 as Xerceas previously said, the teleport gun hasn't been around for a while now so would suggest replacing it with another scenario. Your activity could be better improved as it's usually recommended to have 2 weeks of high, consistent activity and from what I see here, you have yet to gain an understanding of the server rules. Overall, I would like to see you having better, more consistent activity while learning the rules.