Your application lacks a lot of detail and could definitely be expanded on, especially when explaining how you would handle a ban appeal. Your activity could also be improved, personally i prefer staff to be consistently active over the whole week, rather than just getting high activity on 1 or 2 days. Finally i have to agree with MattorS, there are times where you do seem to get very irritated which can leave a negative imprint on your overall attitude.

Your application lacks a lot of detail and could definitely be expanded on, especially when explaining how you would handle a ban appeal. Your activity could also be improved, personally i prefer staff to be consistently active over the whole week, rather than just getting high activity on 1 or 2 days. Finally i have to agree with MattorS, there are times where you do seem to get very irritated which can leave a negative imprint on your overall attitude.