OK so the main point I see you making is that my application is rushed ( which I admit, I didn't put much effort into). There's also the playtime thing, but I have been playing over 2 hrs a day since I got back. I also don't know what you mean by the application lacking detail. Do you mean the scenarios?I don't know what more I was supposed to add to them, they're supposed to be scenarios not stories right? aNyway, that's all I have to say. Feel free to point out anything else.