Honestly
I don't think one week is enough to improve maturity, Your application also lacks detail and i don't know if you know this but Why I should be chosen is one of the key parts so i highly doubt no ones going to comment about it
Anyway good luck!

Honestly I don't think one week is enough to improve maturity, Your application also lacks detail and i don't know if you know this but Why I should be chosen is one of the key parts so i highly doubt no ones going to comment about it Anyway good luck!