You have good activity however it is only 1 week of activity and you should at least have 2 weeks.
Your application is also lacking, for example in this section: Explain "New Life Rule" and give an example scenario, you also need to forget about your previous life.
Also in both of the Explain how you would handle the following situation sections you need to write more detailed.

You have good activity however it is only 1 week of activity and you should at least have 2 weeks. Your application is also lacking, for example in this section: Explain "New Life Rule" and give an example scenario, you also need to forget about your previous life. Also in both of the Explain how you would handle the following situation sections you need to write more detailed.