you application could use some work (look at others for examples and don't copy)

plus add some detail b, you just kind of give a gist of things, rather than showing your knowledge of the questions and proving yourself.

Once you kind of fix things up and prove your knowledge you'll have my vote!

you application could use some work (look at others for examples and don't copy) plus add some detail b, you just kind of give a gist of things, rather than showing your knowledge of the questions and proving yourself. Once you kind of fix things up and prove your knowledge you'll have my vote! :neutralsp: