Thanks all for the feedback, I've already started working on things you've mentioned. Any more feedback?
Expecting at least 1 more comment from Raeker, or on steam he didnt specify where he will give me the feedback
I have given you my feedback. As others have stated, I believe there are other people more fit for the job than you at this current time. If you do not get this, try your best to improve on what I've told you for the next time the applications open up.