Positives:
New Life rule explanation is detailed enough
Amount of time played is high
Negatives:
No example of NLR
Activity isn't very consistent
Application doesn't look very detailed
Conclusion:
I think that you need to get more consistent activity and improve your applicationm try talking to an SSRP staff member, re-reading the rules or looking at other applications to see the amount of effort they put in. (Be careful not to copy)
Once you improve these areas you will stand a great chance.
Good luck!
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