TOPIC: Loading Screen Competition - WINNERS ANNOUNCED!

3rd Entry is here!

Without Certain Effects


With Certain Effects

My entry

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=649995148

Bigwhal wrote: Dont want to be rude,but this looks like shit.

Marco Ubaldo Diaz wrote:
He obviously put a lot of effort in, granted that's your opinion I feel the least we could do in return to the people making these entries are constructive feedback to help them and give them ideas to improve.

Morgan wrote: He did put a lot of effort in it,and i respect him for that,but there are some addons that can help him to the photo look better,idk the exact names but i know an addon that you can arrange the character's pose.

Morgan wrote:
Thank you morgan for helping. People who stick up for themselves are strong, People who stick up for others are stronger.

Great Guy Morgan

Marco Ubaldo Diaz wrote:
Psst, don't say shit, use something more formal and encouraging. For example, ""not really good" or "I believe you can improve it ".

Bigwhal wrote:
I just remembered I could have used source film maker but i used Garry's Mod to do it

Honestly, i would love to do it, but i really dont have the time at the moment.

Maybe i will make a bit of time so i can crush you all with a SFM loading screen. (luv u all gl hf <3)

Gonna start the work tomorrow and will finish it in 3-4 days

Here it is:

steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetai...&fileuploadsuccess=1

Gyazo isnt working atm, so sorry, but your gonna have to click it :c.

Please post to tell me how to improve, i dont really like it, i feel like somethings missing, i may do another one, lets call this a test! ^_^

Dallas. wrote:
The lighting is weird.

Dallas. wrote:
Looks good, i'd try to change the map though, it doesn't really match what ZARP SSRP is currently, maybe try one of the current servers?

notWalrus wrote:
Thought it was.



And to Morgan:

Im doing another one tomorrow, maybe i can show off what i can do better and maybe it will look alot better, you see, im a TF2 animator so all of a sudden, doing half life shit, its a bit weird. Ill see what i can do tomorrow.

Hope you like it haha

Guys, how do you position the player models in actually decent positions, such as kicking a cop, or falling from a shot? I want to give this a go because I have some decent colour corrections, just need to get the best screenshot xD

Morgan wrote:
Looks awesome! Good luck!

That feeling when you are making it and ur friend is with u in server (private server). And just when u get ur job done he is like can i put tsar bomb and xplode it? Im screaming hell no and there it goes... Every npc, prop etc what has been frozen is now unfrozen.
Hopefully i get my motivation back and now go to singleplayer.

Elkku wrote:
Sucks to hear, hope you can get it completed and entered sometime!