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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327939

Always wanted to make my own song never actually tried but I got fl studio yesterday worked on a few songs from scratch tell me what you think, trying to go for a deep house vibe. First One Second One Final Version New Song ~~Keep in mind they're the same versions just different, also they're not done at all, just a one drop.~~	Christopher S Offline Expert Boarder "Anyone?" Posts: 1141 Thanks received: 211 Karma: 13
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327941

2nd one is better, although they are both pretty good so nice job	itzryzo Offline Expert Boarder eks dee! Posts: 1534 Thanks received: 270 Karma: -36
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327942

Good stuff Chris, I'd like to hear some more, maybe some longer length songs!	stratiic Offline User is blocked spitting in your mum's twat Posts: 4803 Thanks received: 1452 Karma: -20
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327944

Good stuff for sure!	Kylie Offline Expert Boarder (͡o‿O͡) Posts: 1030 Thanks received: 266 Karma: -123
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327946

Stratiic wrote: Good stuff Chris, I'd like to hear some more, maybe some longer length songs! Workin on it @itzryzo Yeah the males's voice is a little off tune in the first one, and thanks Kylie.	Christopher S Offline Expert Boarder "Anyone?" Posts: 1141 Thanks received: 211 Karma: 13
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327957

You stole my music. I will kill you Mr.Kompot.	Am1og Offline Legendary Member ZARP Contributor Posts: 1299 Thanks received: 151 Karma: 8
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327960

Am1og wrote: You stole my music. I will kill you Mr.Kompot. Got kompot?	Christopher S Offline Expert Boarder "Anyone?" Posts: 1141 Thanks received: 211 Karma: 13
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327972

Nice job dude... Even bass is nice and smoothy	JokerMan Offline Diamond Boarder Ayyyyyyy Posts: 2946 Thanks received: 279 Karma: 0
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #327992

53 Plays, woah. Edit: 92.. gg	Christopher S Offline Expert Boarder "Anyone?" Posts: 1141 Thanks received: 211 Karma: 13
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #328076

soundcloud.com/timzorrr/timetimetime

Not good but i try

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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #328085

Nice,i like it,but the laughs are pretty creepy. More please,and longer!	Marcooo Offline Diamond Boarder Posts: 3485 Thanks received: 465 Karma: 44
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #328090

Marco Ubaldo Diaz #BiWx4HA wrote: Nice,i like it,but the laughs are pretty creepy. More please,and longer! Working on a better and longer version with different vocals.	Christopher S Offline Expert Boarder "Anyone?" Posts: 1141 Thanks received: 211 Karma: 13
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Made a song 7 years 11 months ago #328509

First song so good	Ken Kask Offline Senior Boarder Aye Posts: 588 Thanks received: 63 Karma: 5
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Made a song 7 years 10 months ago #334187

Song Link Finally finished it, some final touches removed the creepy laughs.	Christopher S Offline Expert Boarder "Anyone?" Posts: 1141 Thanks received: 211 Karma: 13
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Made a song 7 years 10 months ago #334220

Second one really nice, don't be afraid to add more sounds though.	catboy sven ツ Offline Adept Boarder Respected Zarp Contributor Posts: 7193 Thanks received: 1544 Karma: -45
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Made a song 7 years 10 months ago #334235

Aspect wrote: Second one really nice, don't be afraid to add more sounds though. I agree with Aspect, and the song is way too long	GoaliE Offline Fresh Boarder "Wannabe Magic Mike" Posts: 71 Thanks received: 9 Karma: -3
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Made a song 7 years 10 months ago #341543

What about this? It's not done but a song I made with a good drop I guess? soundcloud.com/user-374685309/dont-you-see-1 (Zarp the only forum where I could actually get fast feedback on this) (Don't worry bass is all optimized, raising volume to max is recommended)	Christopher S Offline Expert Boarder "Anyone?" Posts: 1141 Thanks received: 211 Karma: 13
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Made a song 7 years 10 months ago #341549

Christopher S wrote:

What about this? It's not done but a song I made with a good drop I guess?
soundcloud.com/user-374685309/dont-you-see-1

(Zarp the only forum where I could actually get fast feedback on this)
(Don't worry bass is all optimized, raising volume to max is recommended)

Love the song! try making the start shorter, it lasts too long.
apart from that, i love it!

(once you finish it try and get it promoted on a promotions channel, that'll probably help you)
EDIT: Who done the lyrics too? xD

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Made a song 7 years 10 months ago #341551

In my opinion you need something to build up to the drop, in your clip it just has an interval, make something that goes into the beat	TiGzTeR Offline Gold Boarder Portuguese and Proud! Posts: 2221 Thanks received: 850 Karma: 48
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Made a song 7 years 10 months ago #341561

TiGzTeR wrote: In my opinion you need something to build up to the drop, in your clip it just has an interval, make something that goes into the beat Yup, working on some rising fx, I need them. And thanks itzryo that would be nice! Found them on a fx site.	Christopher S Offline Expert Boarder "Anyone?" Posts: 1141 Thanks received: 211 Karma: 13
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